At school we have been learning about similes. Everyday in the morning we have been doing free writing with a focus. Free writing with a focus is when you have a picture in front of you and you write about it. We have to include one simile or to try to include something that we've never done in writing before. I think it is fun but challenging. Are you doing free writing with a focus?
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi Louie - you did a really good job with your writing piece. I think next time you should write or copy your writing onto a doc or a slide so its a little bit easier to read but other than that it was amazing. Good work :)
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